joestfc04
Midland League Division Two
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Post by joestfc04 on Aug 21, 2014 21:22:31 GMT 1
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Post by staffordshrew on Aug 21, 2014 22:43:04 GMT 1
Good read. You are having it too easy at the moment though - a lacklustre 0-0 draw will test out your abilities :0
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Post by shrewder on Aug 22, 2014 8:18:36 GMT 1
Good report. Hope you were in attendance this time.
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Post by ssshrew on Aug 22, 2014 21:30:06 GMT 1
Excellent again. Thank you.
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joestfc04
Midland League Division Two
Posts: 111
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Post by joestfc04 on Aug 22, 2014 21:37:35 GMT 1
Good report. Hope you were in attendance this time. I was indeed. Thank you for your comments!
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Shrewsfan1985
The Loggerheads
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My first team is..: Shrewsbury
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Post by Shrewsfan1985 on Aug 22, 2014 23:39:51 GMT 1
That is a brilliant report once again.
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Post by shrewinjapan on Aug 23, 2014 4:33:49 GMT 1
Nicely written again. Just one thing, you wrote of town's first goal "His attempted clearance smashed into the back of the on-rushing Mangan and bounced patronizingly into the unguarded net." I don't think patronizingly is the adverb you were looking for (not sure how a ball could bounce patronizingly). Agonizingly is what I guess you meant to use?
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joestfc04
Midland League Division Two
Posts: 111
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Post by joestfc04 on Aug 23, 2014 12:44:01 GMT 1
Nicely written again. Just one thing, you wrote of town's first goal "His attempted clearance smashed into the back of the on-rushing Mangan and bounced patronizingly into the unguarded net." I don't think patronizingly is the adverb you were looking for (not sure how a ball could bounce patronizingly). Agonizingly is what I guess you meant to use? Yes, i suppose reading back youre probably right. Thanks.
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Post by Chic on Aug 23, 2014 13:44:18 GMT 1
Good read... Well done!
Any chance of pre match reports to?
I see a lot of pre match reports on other forums which are quite good..
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